I read “Joe’s Letter”. I was impressed that reading this book.
Joe writes a letter to Nan every day. He wrote what happened today in the letter.
I had a pen friend when I was a child. We exchanged letter once a month. We also exchanged puri-kura or cute sticker into envelope. But when we had been high school student, we didn’t write letter by degrees. Instead, we exchanged e-mails. E-mail is very easy and we can replay immediately. But we feel more glad to receive letters than receive e-mails. So we have to write letters to our friends or family if you have a chance.
(106 words)
2009年7月19日日曜日
BR 1-12: Hide and Seek With Carla Crocodile
I read “Hide and Seek With Carla Crocodile” today. I like this book because it makes me happy.
Carla Crocodile played hide and seek with Hippo, Seal and Penguin. First, Carla counted to three. Carla found Hippo first and found Seal the next. Finally, she found Penguin. But when Carla counted to three, he fell over before he got home. Then Penguin has to three.
When I was a child, I often did hide and seek with my friends. I liked this game. “Hide and seek” called in Japanese “Kakurenbo”. I think that it is a little different between hide and seek and kakurenbo. Kakurenbo’s role is the person who found first has to count. I enjoyed reading this book.
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Carla Crocodile played hide and seek with Hippo, Seal and Penguin. First, Carla counted to three. Carla found Hippo first and found Seal the next. Finally, she found Penguin. But when Carla counted to three, he fell over before he got home. Then Penguin has to three.
When I was a child, I often did hide and seek with my friends. I liked this game. “Hide and seek” called in Japanese “Kakurenbo”. I think that it is a little different between hide and seek and kakurenbo. Kakurenbo’s role is the person who found first has to count. I enjoyed reading this book.
(120 words)
BR 1-11:Carla Crocodile's knitting
I read "Carla Crocodile's knitting". This story is Carla ike knitting and she knitted for her friend ,Charlie.Charlie asked her to make some socks for him. She knitted a sock. But when she will make other sock the same, she forgot how she did it. So she looked at the sock and wrote down what she did. She knitted the other sock but these socks are not the same. But Charlie liked the socks.
I like this book. I also liked knitting when I was a child. I often made scarf or grove. I like hand made goods because these goods are only one in the world. I want to try to knit socks or hat if I had enough time.
(122 words)
I like this book. I also liked knitting when I was a child. I often made scarf or grove. I like hand made goods because these goods are only one in the world. I want to try to knit socks or hat if I had enough time.
(122 words)
2009年7月13日月曜日
two important relationships
I watched 'Lilo and Stitch'. This movie thought me two things: The importance of family and friendship. I watched this movie first, I only think that it is fun movie, but when I watched this movie second time, I feel to important things. I’m talking about that two things.
First, I talk about the importance of family. Lilo and her older sister don’t have their parents. So she feels lonely. One day, Lilo took an alien like dog, named Stitch. I think Lilo is very happy because she is no longer lonely. Her older sister always thinks about Lilo. She works for Lilo’s future.
Family is most important tie. Almost people spend with their family every day. I also spend with my family every day. So my family, especially my mother helps me whenever I have trouble. I have older sister and younger sister so I know both Lilo and Nani’s feelings. When I am with my older sister, I depend my older sister but I also think I don’t have to be worried her. When I am with younger sister, I think I have to be dependable and look after her. Family help each other like that. I think when I am with my family, It is the easiest time in my life. I special thanks for my family.
I also learned about the importance of friendship. Lilo sometimes fights with her friends so she doesn’t have real friends. Lilo and Stitch are family, also they are friends. Lilo cover up Stitch when Stitch play up toward people. By Lilo met Stitch, she could get her real friend.
When I am in the university, I am always with my friends. I talk about various things with my friends. I think if I don’t have friends, I couldn’t enjoy my life. When I have trouble, my friends give me advices. Reverse, when my friends have trouble, I think about together. So we support each other. Best friends are my good conferee. I want to cherish my friends forever.
I think these two relationships are essential for our life. People can’t live without relationships because we help each other. I think even any people have some relationships. So we have to cherish our family and friends and keep good relationship. I think keep relationship is more important than increase relationship.
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First, I talk about the importance of family. Lilo and her older sister don’t have their parents. So she feels lonely. One day, Lilo took an alien like dog, named Stitch. I think Lilo is very happy because she is no longer lonely. Her older sister always thinks about Lilo. She works for Lilo’s future.
Family is most important tie. Almost people spend with their family every day. I also spend with my family every day. So my family, especially my mother helps me whenever I have trouble. I have older sister and younger sister so I know both Lilo and Nani’s feelings. When I am with my older sister, I depend my older sister but I also think I don’t have to be worried her. When I am with younger sister, I think I have to be dependable and look after her. Family help each other like that. I think when I am with my family, It is the easiest time in my life. I special thanks for my family.
I also learned about the importance of friendship. Lilo sometimes fights with her friends so she doesn’t have real friends. Lilo and Stitch are family, also they are friends. Lilo cover up Stitch when Stitch play up toward people. By Lilo met Stitch, she could get her real friend.
When I am in the university, I am always with my friends. I talk about various things with my friends. I think if I don’t have friends, I couldn’t enjoy my life. When I have trouble, my friends give me advices. Reverse, when my friends have trouble, I think about together. So we support each other. Best friends are my good conferee. I want to cherish my friends forever.
I think these two relationships are essential for our life. People can’t live without relationships because we help each other. I think even any people have some relationships. So we have to cherish our family and friends and keep good relationship. I think keep relationship is more important than increase relationship.
(389 words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
Portfolio for Writing III (template)
Student ID: 08164
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | letter to a host family | 2009.04.09 | 8 | 255 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Letter to host family (rewriting) | 2009.06.10 | 6 | 291 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University life | 2009.06.03 | 5 | 464 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University Life (rewriting) | 2009.06.29 | 5 | 455 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Relationships | 2009.06.30 | 6 | 351 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | two important relationships | 2009.07.13 | 6 | 389 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Totals | --- | --- | 36 | 2205 | 7 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | University Life (rewriting) | |||
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ||||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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2.6. Additional reflections on comments
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3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Victorian Adventure | 2009.04.19 | 142 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | The Storm | 2009.04.30 | 110 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Castle Adventure | 2009.05.07 | 143 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | Pirate Adventure | 2009.05.13 | 141 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | Who Took the Teacher's Scissors | 2009.05.18 | 140 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Ringo the Dingo | 2009.05.22 | 213 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Nicky Upstairs and Down | 2009.06.01 | 177 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | Rabbit and Hare Divide an Apple | 2009.06.01 | 258 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | Giraffe Goes Skating | 2009.06.15 | 117 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | Zippy Zebra Finds a Friend | 2009.06.15 | 152 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | Carla Crocodile's knitting | 2009.07.18 | 122 |
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3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | 〇 | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
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2009年7月4日土曜日
Shopping
Today, I had a supplementary lecture of biology.
At afternoon, I went to down town with my friends to do shopping. First, we went pasta restaurant and ate lunch. It was delicious and cheap. Next, we went PARCO. There are many people because it hold summer sale until July 15. I bought a one piece there. It reduced the price by 10% so I could it cheaper. After that we moved Kami-touri and visited some shops. Then, I bought a T-shirt. It was very cute T-shirt and I’ll take it to camp. At 4:00 p.m. we had a tea time at Dotal Coffee. We told about our camp which we planning to go summer vacation. Finally we took ‘puri-kura’ at Festa.
I had a very good time today!
(128 words)
At afternoon, I went to down town with my friends to do shopping. First, we went pasta restaurant and ate lunch. It was delicious and cheap. Next, we went PARCO. There are many people because it hold summer sale until July 15. I bought a one piece there. It reduced the price by 10% so I could it cheaper. After that we moved Kami-touri and visited some shops. Then, I bought a T-shirt. It was very cute T-shirt and I’ll take it to camp. At 4:00 p.m. we had a tea time at Dotal Coffee. We told about our camp which we planning to go summer vacation. Finally we took ‘puri-kura’ at Festa.
I had a very good time today!
(128 words)
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