Revised Favorite Place

I’m going to talk about my favorite place. I have some favorite places. For example, I like my room, in the car, karaoke, and so on. But my room is my best favorite place. I have four reasons why I like my room. First, it is comfortable place, it also is to do my hobbies, there are many my treasures, and I have attachment.

First, it is comfortable for me. My room catches the sun so there is warm. In winter day, I like to take a nap on the sunny bed. Then, I need not heating. Aroma candle also feel relaxed me. My favorite smell is lavender and when I look candle’s flame, I’m very calm. My furniture especially bed and sofa are very old. I gave them when I was a elementary school student. They are old but I’m attached to them. I have two sisters but my room is not share with them. So I can do what I want to do without interference.

Second, it has many hobbies. In my room, there is a stereo and I always listen to music with it. Sometimes, I listen to music with i-Pod. It is my custom to listen music before go to bed. Reading comic books and magazines is also my hobby. I like comic books so when I have free time, I read comic books with listening music. I have another one hobby. That is painting. I can’t concentrate to paint anywhere but my room.

Third, there are many treasures of mine. On the desk, there are many photos. I always look these photos and I feel very happy. In the photo albums, there are many photos. I sometimes take out and look them. I like jewelry and especially I’m interested in earring nowadays. So I have many earrings. Some of them, I gave my friend. Also, I have big teddy bear. I gave it to my parents when we tripped to Nagasaki. I always put it by my pillow.

Finally, My room is not large and new. There are not TV and air conditioner. Maybe you think my room is unconvenient place but it is the best place for me. My room's smell, extend and atomosphere and so on. All these things are make me relax. I've used my room about for fifteen years so I am attached to my room.

When I am in my room, I recover my health and be happy. There are important place for me. I think my room is more comfortable place than any other place. So I always in my room and I like my room the best.

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