2009年10月13日火曜日

Favorite Place, Essay

I’m going to talk about my favorite place. My favorite place is my room. I have tree reasons why I like my room.
First, it is comfortable for me. My room catches the sun so there is warm. In winter day, I like to take a nap on the sunny bed. Then, I need not heating. Aroma candle also feel relaxed me. My favorite smell is lavender and when I look candle’s flame, I’m very calm. My furniture especially bed and sofa are very old. I gave them when I was a elementary school student. They are old but I’m attached to them. I have two sisters but my room is not share with them. So I can do what I want to do without interference.
Second, it has many hobbies. In my room, there is a stereo and I always listen to music with it. Sometimes, I listen to music with Ipod. It is my custom to listen music before go to bed. Reading comic books and magazines is also my hobby. I like comic books so when I have free time, I read comic books with listening music. I have another one hobby. That is painting. I can’t concentrate to paint anywhere but my room.
Finally, there are many treasures of mine. On the desk, there are many photos. I always look these photos and I feel very happy. In the photo albums, there are many photos. I sometimes take out and look them. I like jewelry and especially I’m interested in earring nowadays. So I have many earrings. Some of them, I gave my friend. Also, I have big teddy bear. I gave it to my parents when we tripped to Nagasaki. I always put it by my pillow.
I think my room is more comfortable place than any other place.

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5 件のコメント:

Takako さんのコメント...

What kid of comics and magazines do you like to read???
What are your favorite songs???

yumi さんのコメント...

I like my room too. I can relax in my room.
What kind of music do you like the best??

Akiha さんのコメント...

I also write to like my room. My room is comfotable isn't it?
I think your room is very clea.

匿名 さんのコメント...

Hi, Risa.
I think your essay is good.
You should make some paragraphs and your essay will be better^^

saki さんのコメント...

Hi, Risa!
I am interested in your room. Please invite me!!
What song do you like the best??